I cannot remember what we fought about…
I hope it was important
I can’t remember why you made me cry…
I hope you had a reason
From the depths of dark, unknown bowels
Of misconstrued and messed up emotions
Travels a solitary tear…
Carrying the burden of my sorrows
I seek solace from a friend…
Hundreds of miles away
Finding warmth from a hug
By simply reading the syllables
And, a lonely tear…
Makes its journey to the threshold of my eyes…
While, I search…
I search for an answer to the elusive why…
And, you remain…
In the sounds of silence
And, forgotten lyrics of oft-heard songs…
While, the heavy tear dries itself on my cheeks
10 comments:
Hi, I dont have words to appreciate this combination of words. But I would love you to allow me to share it on public forum with my friends.....
:)...:D...*big hug*..love the simplicity....
freaking awesome bro! you're a true poet, hitting my frozen heart
You are right. Tears can be so heavy at times.
love the way you have written, puts the message right there. as usual love it! :D
Eu adorei!
"I seek solace from a friend…
Hundreds of miles away
Finding warmth from a hug
By simply reading the syllables"{
this verse resonates with me more than anything, but I feel like you might know this just by reading my blog. Beautiful writing. I love your depth.
much love,
Yvonne
I can’t remember why you made me cry…
I hope you had a reason.......
the above two lines are just....so very moving,touched simply touched and grateful for this......keep up the good work,you may wipe away many a heavy tear
the resonance of heavy tears scale more distances than are apt... perhaps the friend you seek solace from is on search of a viable destination too...
love the way u write ritzi.. the strength of a poet is in his ability to make his reader feel "this one talks to me"..................
"I cannot remember what we fought about…
I hope it was important
I can’t remember why you made me cry…
I hope you had a reason"
Reminds me of lives I left behind....
It is beautiful...simple, gentle.. and genuinely felt...and its power is seen by the hearts it has connected...Love it...keep writing
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