If you want…
I can be the storm
Powerful in its silence
Majestic in its magnificence
If you need
I can be the earth
Calm in its vastness
Fiery in its turbulence
Yet if you crave
I can’t come back
Even if you ask
I won’t turn back
If you look
I’ll always be there
If you feel
I will always love you
But I can’t hold you
If you fall
...I cannot breakdown
The unbreachable wall
5 comments:
Its good....coz it has the truth of human emotions involved in it....We can't be god....what makes us human is the very fact that we can feel in positive and negative ways....we need not do everything right all the time....we need not be perfect....it has a touch of the feeling we get...when the heart desperately wants to go back....but conscience or lets say the mind,directs us towards something else....which the world calls right...even we do,sometimes....You know how to make people feel your poems...keep writing
How well have you strung together words......the stream of thought yo uhave shown is just too sweet and serious at the same time.... superflous ideas and imagintaion has made the poem really special....
One of your best i think!
(I would personally only quibble with the word 'coz', as its colloquial spelling somehow spoils the otherwise elegant and refined flow of the language)
I can imagine this set to music.......
Have you ever had your poetry set to music?? Just a thought...
picturesque..............love gets another beautiful emotion from this verse
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