Bereft of all emotions
Windswept and raped
I stand free…
Robbed of sorrow
Happy and numb
I stand silent
Denied of sunshine
Cold and hidden
I stand alone…
Life in hand
A song on my lips
I stand dreaming…
Here I am
Standing…Waiting…Desiring…
That eternity will end
4 comments:
Its a bold poem like I said.....it has the charm of saying n meaning a lot in a few words....your poem encompasses very strong emotions....like a rebel....like someone toughened by time...this poem expresses the kind of emotion...where you know....you are so hurt n abused by all kind of things over a long period...that nothing hurts you anymore....you are totally fearless...its very beautiful...keep writing
All I can say is dt this is one of your best poems!!! You've done a beautiful job.....Artistically speaking, it's highly commendable, but as a practical human being,one needs to shed this attitude,as it never pays to feel desolate and disgusted...you just need to accept and appreciate things, the way they are....
Awesome....
Though I'm scarcely qualified to comment, I can't help feeling your work is much more than merely "worthy of publication"....
Keep it up!!
Every journey comes to an end......so does every wait.....but dont let this flow of your beautiful writings have such a fate.........
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