If you can believe…lets take flight
Overcome our boundaries
Forget what could have been better
And together explore the azure infinity
If you can trust…come hold my hand
Let’s take a walk along the forgotten pathways…
Leave behind our footprints in the age old dust
And together welcome the new dawn
If you can fight…lets snatch immortality
Be larger than life in this petty rat race
Survive like a lighthouse through the storm of time
And together force our demons to see defeat…
If you can love…come lets spread it
Bring a smile on those parched lips…
A healing touch to those in pain
And together carry forward the torch of humanity
Is it asking for too much…
From the only rational animal
If you can…please make it true
And together all of us lets say…we can.
9 comments:
u really made me smile today... thats all i can say thnx for dis little gift
its wonderful...it really is...like hope shining amidst a cloud of doubts n dying wishes...your language n style is lovely....i like the positive shade in this poem...you have put in a wide array of thoughts with an amazing ease yet there is this lovely rhythm of a common message in your poem...you are polishing yourself n your words...keep writing
nice....very nice...esp the last few lines.....very tender feelings...
somehow the poignant beauty and dignity of your words redeem the pain they express... breathtakingly eloquent and powerful as always!!
happy new year to you and yours!
lois
(p.s. i deleted my orkut account because people were playing silly pranks, but always happy to keep in touch with luminous souls like yourself)
I wonder if anyone has yet commented on your choice of images... subtley complimenting the dignity that flows through the syllables... beautiful its been quite some time that I've been treated to some 'refreshing' eloquence :)
Buena suerte, amigo. Y Feliz Año Nuevo!
:)
Y gracias para esta español !
:)
awesome.loved it.brimming with hope.very warm.truly cheery.=]
The revolutionary-he indeed,has a sheer sense of the poetic mantra within him.He can conquer the heights of Eliot someday given the way he is progressing.
Hah. Hope is quite the motivator, until everything comes crashing down again.
You've captured the exaltation really well.
If u can..............never ever give up on writing.......they spread happiness...they bring smiles to faces.......go on.........
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