I look at you, this stormy evening…
While you are lost in your dance
I watch as your rhythm beckon the drunk winds…
And, you slowly draw me in…
The dangerously beautiful beats…
Ring out solitary and true…
And, I let the dance of madness carry on around me…
While I seek peace in you
You brought my life to a stop…
In a moment’s notice
Almost, mocking my presumptions of control…
Yet somehow, making me feel free…
I watch…
The rolling clouds in the distance
Silent as a distant memory…
Buried yet remembered…in my solitary sojourns
Tender…bittersweet…thy impressions
My failures…the darkness…
That I could not take away from your eyes…
Let them be drowned…as you dance and I lose myself…
4 comments:
:] yeah, as you dance and I lose myself, me too.
Awesome!!!! this verse was just so very nice...well-turned,well-tuned,beautifully musical!!!!
"You brought my life to a stop…
In a moment’s notice
Almost, mocking my presumptions of control…
Yet somehow, making me feel free…"
Those people, who make us lose control on ourselves and yet make us feel good about it, are the ones who can truly change the meaning of our lives...keep writing
Wouldnt wanna spoil the aftertaste of this one by stating too much..hoping tht "Fanatically romantic work! :)" would explain it all
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