Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Crimson Sky


Let the directions be directionless tonight
And, the drunk breeze wild…
Death came to her in my arms
And, the crimson sky didn’t care that night

So, what if the tears are safely tucked away?
And, solace seems nowhere in sight…
I await the other side…
While the sky keeps burning my eyes

Your last, cold kiss…
The bloodless eyes…
And, the urn was all that was left that night…
But, there is still fire in the sky and I’m alright

The cost you paid for my life was too high…
I live, lost in the pages of your diary
While I watch the fire in the sky and think
I lost you in my arms and the crimson sky never cared…

11 comments:

A Poetess said...

just awesome imagery used...and the sky never cares...for we shall live & die under the same sky but it shall never care for it has seen untold things in the past & shall do so in the future.

Apeksha said...

"But, there is still fire in the sky and I’m alright...." Yes it doesnt care....for it never cared when we laughed and smiled in its shade...and when we cried and mourned as well....it is beautiful....the unreasonably heavy burden of pain that man has to carry in his life...and yet...it is just him who has the capability to bear that..you have brought out an inexplicable frustration in a subtle manner....keep writing

Starr said...

Beautiful imagery...keep writing, that's all I have to say; my poems aren't anything like this, and I must say, I am slightly jealous.^^

Beautifully Delicious said...

Beautiful.

rainsongstress said...

its just very beautiful brother...no exaggeration...but your writing touches a deep chord inside..seriously does..:(....keep writing like this...*hug*

Honeybee said...

:) you need critics like me.
am proud of you, my friend :)

rupa said...

i thnk it ws just amazing.......i nvr thought u hv so much hidden inside u.........wel v al feel d absence of smthng bt to put it in words so beautifully is just an amazing art......

Aurion said...

Great man! Like ur way of thinking!
check out mine too 'n let me know ^^

vanillagurl said...

its awesome! i like your posts very much!

ecelliam said...

Dreamers are my favorate people, I happen to be one myself. Very nice poetry. Check mine out.

http://ecelliamsonton.blogspot.com

WHAT COLOR YOU WANT? said...

Well knit lines. They convey my state of mind so well.
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