tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3370854607321998741.post7501798717588960532..comments2024-02-28T13:58:48.344+05:30Comments on Dare to know the Truth: No One's WatchingRitayanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02726810523349962872noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3370854607321998741.post-22692266408934672052009-09-25T20:51:16.526+05:302009-09-25T20:51:16.526+05:30And the sky mourns
As, it hides its stars
Behind a...And the sky mourns<br />As, it hides its stars<br />Behind a black blanket<br /><br />.................reminds me of a hurt sky.....a dark and broken soul......it was great to see the emotions just flowing out.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3370854607321998741.post-51803403180426210892009-09-08T17:49:04.808+05:302009-09-08T17:49:04.808+05:30You bring across through your strong use of words,...You bring across through your strong use of words, some deep emotions.. which are often undefinable.but felt in the corner of all of our hearts.... Poignant, indeed.Thursday's child has far to go....https://www.blogger.com/profile/09659969795482498083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3370854607321998741.post-3810932223691508082009-08-22T07:38:31.281+05:302009-08-22T07:38:31.281+05:30every word of the poem is true...
The very theme a...every word of the poem is true...<br />The very theme and the truth behind the poem that how much solace is there when we are not being observed is a notable yet hidden fact.People are scared of the world at some point or the other because nobody is perfect.Therefore, at times the peace you get being in solitude is incomparable..keep writing..The Cherubinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16692874585803714828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3370854607321998741.post-19935049127758554742009-08-21T23:32:46.665+05:302009-08-21T23:32:46.665+05:30The starting stanza itself is like bang! "sle...The starting stanza itself is like bang! "sleeping face of eternal rest" that subtlety in the line...i like your portrayal of ordinary everyday things in a seemingly ordinary scene..yet the beauty your words can bring to the whole picture is what i call magic...feel privileged to read your works...keep writingApekshahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12756043043345185203noreply@blogger.com